Three poetry styles from Red Lion Jr. High

Posted by on March 14, 2011 in Red Lion Area Junior High | 1 comment

Mrs. Julie Urey, an 8th grade language arts teacher at Red Lion Area Junior High School, submitted poetry that was written by her students.

Metaphor poems:

IPod
My family lives in an IPod.
When it is turned on, I leave.
My mom is the music that keeps the beat and all of us going.
Jimmy is the headphones that tries to keep us connected to one another.
My little brother, Ryan, is the video game that keeps playing and running the battery down.
My sister, Lisa, is the memory that attempts to save us all.
I am the protective cover that keeps us safe from being scratched.
– By Danny Graffious

Closet
My family lives in a closet.
My mom is the light that helps me see the way.
My dad is the dust that sometimes I just brush off.
My dog is the electricity that helps mom brighten our way.
I am the darkness.
– By Aaron Stone

XBox
My family lives in an XBox.
My dad is the cord that connects us.
My mom is the fun games.
I am the hard drive that never forgets.
by Dylan Redding

Diamante poems:

Entertainment
Fun, excited
Dancing, playing, watching
Games, videos, school, bedtime
Sleeping, studying, punished
Terrible, lazy
Boredom
– By Matt Alston

Rain
Cold, wet
Crashing, splashing, bouncing
Precipitation, water, solar, sunrise
Setting, warming, burning
Yellow, orange
Sun
– By Randi Ishman

Cinquain poems:

Skate
Fun, challenging
Riding, grinding, flipping
Keeps you in shape
Bike
– By Quenntin Detter

Hershey
Exciting, wonderful
Riding, swimming, running
Always eating the candy
Amusement Park
– By Whitney McCarty

1 Comment

  1. Tat my poem

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