Contest entry: Treasure island
By Lachlan Keen Gemmill Edwards
One morning I found a treasure map on my desk. I told my friends about that map. Then we went down to our car and packed our shovel and our map.
Then we climbed in then drove off following the map.
Suddenly we were lost. We also lost the maps direction.
Then we found our way back and stayed on the trail.
Then 1 mile later we found the treasure.
We found the treasure by the street.
We dug it up.
It was deep.